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Kaitanu gets his first paid job ever.

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Earning A Copper

Postby Kaitanu on September 22nd, 2015, 4:54 am

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The 18th Day of Fall, 515 AV

A strange feeling of agitation hung over the marketplace that morning. Words as yet unintelligible to Kaitanu followed him like the sharp wind before a storm. There were looks, too; curious, distant, mistrusting. Those he understood. The pale kelvic would have thought it was just himself drawing the unwanted attention, but he noticed the way other foreigners- obvious in their dress and language- hurried from one place to another as though to keep out of a heavy rain. A few met his gaze with the earnestness of warning, though no words passed between them. They must not have known that he was a slave, or else they didn’t care. They seemed to have the need for someone else like themselves, one from the outside, to confirm that they were not alone. Wondering what this was about, Kaitanu nevertheless didn’t stop to ask. It was not in him to do so by training, even if it might have been by nature. The sky overhead was overcast and moody, reflecting the muted thunder in the streets. He would rather not make some misstep and turn it into a storm.

As Kaitanu passed through the main thoroughfare there was a knot of anxious and angry Drykas near one of the larger tents. They seemed to be talking rapidly, both by mouth and hand, about something. What it was Kaitanu couldn’t tell, but there was a familiar scent in the air that rose above the others. It was the same that wafted out of the butcher’s tent a few yards back- a copper tang which clung to the roof of the mouth. In the dirt near the feet of the group was a dark stain, but it had been much trampled and could now be anything. Kaitanu didn’t want to think about it. He hurried past as their eyes followed his dark-clad figure, resting on the dagger Dravite had given him with some portentous meaning. Perhaps they thought him too slight to do harm and let him go, but the feeling of being watched followed him wherever he went. It pressed down on his body from all sides, making an already difficult task that much more arduous.

Never before had Kaitanu been compelled to get a job, and a paying one at that. Slavery was the only line of “work” he had ever known, and that required no extra searching on his part. The pale kelvic merely had to stand on display while the auctioneer tried to interest the crowd. In some twisted way it was easier than what he was doing now; walking from tent to tent and seeing if they needed an extra hand. One look at his bleached, very non-Drykas appearance and most wouldn’t even give him a hearing. When they did stop to listen, Kaitanu’s meagre skills didn’t fit the bill. They also seemed to think that he was using the Blackwater pavilion as a portal to their favor. To Kaitanu it was necessary, by every rule of propriety for a slave, to make mention of his “master” in all things. That, and his appearance, were against him. Had the horse kelvic shown them his considerable strength they might have been more willing to listen.

However, being too used to taking what came to him Kaitanu didn’t argue any point. At each dismissal he walked humbly from one tent to the next, driven by fear rather than hope. In spite of Dravite’s unaccountably non-violent behavior toward him, the slave still feared to return to the Blackwater pavilion without having obtained some acceptable employment. He still did not understand that, because of Dravite’s intervention, he was no longer a slave at all. So far as he knew this whole “job” thing was just a means to an end for Dravite; more income for the pavilion as a slave was being put to good use.

Unfortunately, this was no place for a personal slave to find such employment. By the 11th bell Kaitanu had no prospects, though he had been at the market since just after sunrise. If anyone was hiring they didn’t want a slip of a man who couldn’t understand their language or customs. They would probably have taken on slave labour, but Dravite had been very clear on the subject. Kaitanu must get paid work. Why not use the kelvic at home? He didn’t know. Dravite was…odd, inexplicable. Kaitanu couldn’t figure him out at all. For the first few days the Drykas had brought him food, or had him eat with the family around their fire- something no master would ever have allowed. Kaitanu hadn’t been chained up, he had a bedroll, clothing, a weapon…

The pale man shook his head. He’d gone down that route so many times and still didn’t understand. There was no use getting distracted now. Only a few tents remained at the edge of the city, and then it was off down yet another of the winding thoroughfares. He fully expected to be sent off without so much as a glance, but the beaten slave in him pressed on in the face of failure. Every avenue must be trod before he made his way back to the black tents and submitted to the inevitable punishment for failure.

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Earning A Copper

Postby Kaitanu on September 22nd, 2015, 5:39 am

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Looking up at the faded purple of the tent before him, Kaitanu steeled his nerves for the next rejection. There was a sign that hung on a metal stand beside the tent flap, tall enough for even those on horseback to see clearly. In several languages it read “The Guided Horse”. The name “Kelna Nightrider” was scrawled in trailing letters underneath. That was one good thing about the marketplace; those that worked there tended to speak Common more fluently than other Drykas. It didn’t mean more success for Kaitanu in finding a job, but at least he didn’t have to spend so much time trying to make sense of what others were saying to him.

With a steadying breath he pushed through the flap of the tent and stepped into the violet twilight inside. Even here the smell and sound of other horses was almost overpowering, but Kaitanu was used to that by now. He only noticed as a part of the whole picture. Even the woman sitting at a small table just inside looked a bit equine. Kaitanu wouldn’t have been at all surprised to find out she was a kelvic horse, too, though he doubted it. He kept his eyes downcast in the typically humble manner of a slave, lest she look up from her letter and find him watching.

“I may help you?”

His thoughts were broken as she suddenly spoke, her voice deeper than he expected. Kaitanu looked up, but not quite enough to meet her gaze.

“If you please, are you Kelna Nightrider?”

“I am.” smiling, she stood up and approached him. Her eyes looked him up and down, appraising. “You have a horse that needs rest?”

Kaitanu was glad to hear that, like many of the others here, her Common was decent, if a bit thick on the accent. He shook his head. “No, Mistress. I’ve come here at my master Dravite Blackwater’s bidding seeking employment, if you have any positions available.”

Perhaps his problem was the tendency to be rather formal in his speech. On a slave it fit, but for the rough and tumble world of Endrykas it was, perhaps, better to simplify. He corrected himself at once.

“A job- I would like a job, if you should have use for me.”

Tilting her head, the woman regarded him with a critical but somehow smiling eye. The expression rather unnerved him, though he didn’t say so, or even appear to be unnerved at all. Only in his somewhat rigid posture could the woman have told that he was ill at ease. Otherwise his facial expression was neutral.

“Blackwater, it is?”

He nodded. “Yes, Mistress. My Master, Dravite Blackwater, has sent me to obtain a job. It must be a paid job, as per his instructions.” Not knowing the customary procedures for such an interview, Kaitanu threw this last sentence out at her as though he was fulfilling yet another errand as a personal slave. So far as he was concerned Dravite’s instructions were commands that had to be obeyed.

To Kelna, however, his appearance and words were incongruous. “Did not know Dravite Blackwater kept slaves. Why send a slave to get paid job?”

For an instant her smile faltered, and her brows knitted together as she looked at him. Kaitanu tensed when her gaze fell on the knife at his side, which Dravite had bought for him and suggested- in Kaitanu’s mind, told- that it should be worn. However, the eviction from her property did not follow as he expected.

“Slaves do not have knives.” she mused, her smile having returned, like the sun coming out from behind a cloud. “So, you want paid job? I own horse stables here. You have skill with horses?”

“Mistress will find that I have some skill. I am kelvic, and can turn myself into a horse.”

“Kelvic?” she asked, the word obviously unusual on her tongue. Suddenly, the woman brightened. “Yes…kelvic…skin-changer. This, I know. You will show me, yes?”

Kaitanu didn’t take this as a question, but a command, and bowed his head in assent. The slave in him was too strong yet to even think about denying the request of any free person, especially if it might earn for him what his master desired. Immediately, almost without conscious thought, he began to undress right in front of the woman. There was no consciousness on his part, nor embarrassment on hers. As a Drykas she was used to seeing both children and adults run around in the nude. Her eyes lingered on his scars as he carefully folded and set aside the clothing Dravite had bought for him. What she thought she didn’t say, but stood back as he got on all fours and, with a bright flash of light, shifted forms.

“Well, I’ll be…that is truly a wonderful trick. How very fascinating!” Kelna said, slipping into Pavi in her excitement. Grinning widely, she moved forward to touch Kaitanu’s nose, which he let her do without so much as a flinch. Her manner was a bit disconcerting to the slave, as though she had found some new clockwork mechanism to work out. But then he supposed she must not have seen many of his kind before. So far he hadn’t seen any in this place, either, and Dravite had acted surprised when he shifted. Perhaps kelvics were not so common here as they were in Ravok and Kenash. There, unless you were an exotic or particularly gorgeous specimen, no one gave two figs when you shifted.

“So much light at start of it. How is it done? Is painful? Are you only horse or other things?” she went back to Common, rattling off questions on top of one another. When he didn’t answer she said, realizing, “Ah, no speaking in this skin? But you understand me, yes?”

Kaitanu nodded slowly in the manner of a human, rather than a horse. He had kept his head somewhat lowered both out of habit and to keep from hitting the roof of the tent. Still there was enough room for her to move about him and look over his flank and conformation. He wondered vaguely if all the tents around here were large enough for horses to come through on a regular basis. That wouldn’t have surprised him at all.

“If you will stay a chime longer, I wish to see.” she explained, canting her head one way, then another. “Maybe you can be useful here; you can understand horses. You can speak to horses in their tongue?”

Kaitanu nodded.

“I can see your teeth, yes?”

Obediently he opened his mouth and held it that way as she peered in. The request came out of the blue, but he wasn’t going to stop her.

“Fair health, no filing necessary.” Kelna moved to look in his eyes, then his ears.

“Strange color, beautiful. Ears clean- good. Except for eyes you seem just like another horse.” A thought occurred to her, and she looked shrewdly at him. “You are not gelding. You will not try to breed in this skin, no?”

This time he shook his head vigorously and she looked pleased.

“Good. Let me look you over- I can have no sickness here, and you might be useful.”

Might be useful… Kaitanu tried not to let hope get the better of him at those words, but it seemed that showing her his horse form might have paid off. The woman was walking around him now, patting his neck, sides, looking under him, running her fingers along his spine.

“You are not too big, little skinny but not bad, don’t have aggressive in looks. Many scars, however. You fight with other horses?”

Again he shook his head ‘no’.

“You were slave- beaten, I guess. Same scars as on your back. So it shows on both skins. Yes, I see.”

She lifted up his legs to check his hooves, looking over her shoulder at him.

“No shoes? Guess not- skin-changing, that would bring pain. Not good, no.”

Kelna seemed to be talking more to herself than Kaitanu, and her fingers were probing further than the average person would have allowed. Not too invasive, but still uncomfortable. Kaitanu took it without complaint, but he was glad when she pulled back at last and faced him with her strange smile. It was a bit more thoughtful than at first, but still unnervingly cheerful.

“You look healthy enough, and maybe having a skin-changer, a kelvic, will be good. I will try you out. Change back and follow me.”

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Earning A Copper

Postby Kaitanu on September 22nd, 2015, 5:40 am

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I will try you out.... Kaitanu caught his breath at this. Truly, he had expected her to toss him back to the street once she’d gotten what she wanted. Perhaps there was more information on kelvics she could get from him, but she hardly needed to “try him out” for that. The first dawning of relief trickled along his limbs, in spite of all his desire not to expect too much.

However, as he was used to hiding his emotions, Kelna would not have known by looking at Kaitanu how her decision had made him feel. In any case, she was too busy watching his transformation, still clearly fascinated. Kelna didn’t look away until after the bright light had passed and Kaitanu was back in his former skin. Once more her eyes lingered on his scars, as though trying to match them to those on the horse. When he began to dress again she turned and put away her letters and her quill, stowing them inside the small desk. He was quick enough not to keep her waiting for long.

“You finished? Yes? Good. Follow me.” Kelna motioned for him with her hand and exited out a flap in the back of the tent and into the pasture. There were a few men and women there already, and more than a few horses, some freely grazing and others tethered to posts in the ground. About their feet was plenty of golden grass, and within easy reach were large troughs of water. Kaitanu could tell at a glance that there were many breeds represented, most of which he recognized. A few he had never seen before, but their bridles proclaimed them to be the property of outsiders.

At this thought, Kaitanu remembered his long trek down the main market thoroughfare, but it was soon forced away. Kelna had begun to walk him about the open paddock, explaining in her imperfect Common what sort of work was done there and how. He was on trial, but unlike everyone else in the market Kelna was willing to give him any chance at all. Kaitanu still felt as though something heavy had been removed from his shoulders. After the strangeness of Dravite’s behavior- not to mention everyone else at the Blackwater pavilion- he had felt more afraid than usual to fail at his assigned task.

“You speak in horse tongue as human?”

Kelna had suddenly stopped in her progress and was looking at him with her odd smile. Kaitanu had been listening to her the whole time, but his mind was also full of other worries, so it took him a moment to try and get the right words out. It was a difficult concept to explain.

“Somewhat. Not as well as in my horse form. The vocalizations are a bit different.”

He paused for a moment to re-think what he was saying. Kelna had that look of trying to process something and coming up short which made him a bit fearful. If masters- or freemen- hated anything it was when a slave appeared smarter than they were.

“I speak a little, but understand what they are saying when in human form.” After all, his ears and hearing didn’t change much in-between. A lot of the language was in the body anyway, which anyone well acquainted with horses could read. Kaitanu was just able to pick up more nuances by understanding both at once to a more intimate degree.

Kelna nodded and her quizzical expression relaxed. “Ah, I see. Very good. You come and show me, yes?”

Kaitanu followed the woman as she weaved through horses and handlers with ease, returning greetings without taking her eyes off of her destination. Though the kelvic didn’t know what to expect, he thought he could guess, and fervently hoped that somehow he would be able to impress her. If not, then it was back to the search, and back to more rejection.

At one end of the pasture was a small clump of horses, notable not so much for being tethered so they could congregate if they wished, but because one of their number, a palomino mare, stood so far apart from them. In fact, her tether looked a bit taut from where Kaitanu stood, as though she was trying to get as far away from the group as possible.

“That one, mare,” Kelna said, seeming to read his thoughts, “She comes in with others and is close with them until morning. Mare keeps moving away, and you must find out why.”

From Kelna’s tone, Kaitanu got the impression that she already knew the answer but was testing him. He’d had to play these sorts of games before and they always brought back unpleasant, half-remembered sensations of pain. The kelvic could simply approach the mare and find out what was going on, but if his answer was different than Kelna’s, what then? If he failed, what would she do? What could she do? Being a free woman she might do what she wished to him as a slave, just so long as he wasn’t damaged. That put a damper on what, for someone else, might have been an interesting intellectual puzzle. For masters who wanted quick thinking in their slaves their usual treatment was a counter-intuitive. Often the poor wretches would lock up and their brains would go dead from fear. Kaitanu had learned not to freeze, but he still agonized needlessly.

To Kelna this might have seemed like an innocent test, but to Kaitanu there was no such thing. Not in his experience. However, as not complying would be the worse for him he approached the mare to see what was wrong with her. Instinctively, Kaitanu moved with a slow but steady pace, keeping in her line of sight and speaking to the mare as well as he could in her tongue. With his human mouth and throat it was more difficult, but he at least got the mare’s attention without scaring her. As she turned her head to see him better, however, he noted that there was something not quite right in her gaze. The mare seemed to be looking at his approach out of the inner corner of her eye, rather than straight on. It was a subtle shift, but enough for him to tell the difference. Kaitanu moved into an easier space for her to see his approach, speaking calmly to her as he reached his hand out for her to smell.

Friend, I am friend… good… no harm.

Even with his human voice, he sounded almost like a horse himself. The ability came without much conscious thought because it was a part of himself, like the equine instincts that no amount of abuse could ever completely wipe away. And there was something else, some indefinable quality about himself that seemed to come forth, even in his two-legged body. Somehow, other horses could sense, or feel, that he was something like them. The mare felt comforted by his presence, though she was still clearly agitated about something. When Kaitanu reached out his hand she snuffled it, then moved toward him as though she recognized a friend. With her head cocked in an odd way the mare looked him over, her dark eyes pleading.

Behind and several paces off, Kelna watched the pale man with fascination. Kaitanu and the mare looked and sounded as though they were speaking to one another, communicating in the way of striders and Drykas. Yet the palomino was no strider, nor anything else out of the common way, and the kelvic was not one of Kelna’s people. The anxious mare had been tame enough the night before, but even then she hadn’t treated any of the other staff like this- nuzzling them as though they were well-known. She seemed almost to be seeking comfort from the odd, pale human who stood before her.

“You find out what is wrong, yes?” Kelna said after a moment.

Kaitanu frowned slightly. He had one hand at the mare's cheek, while the other rubbed her neck gently to keep her calm. “I believe so, Mistress. It’s her eye- her left one. She’s an older horse, so I believe, though I could be wrong, that she might have something there which is blocking her sight.”

“You think so?”

Kaitanu ducked his head humbly. “It is my belief, though I could easily be wrong.”

“You doubt yourself without reason.” Kelna said this more to herself than Kaitanu. She had seen other slaves before, and this overly self-effacing attitude seemed to be very common among them, if they ever spoke at all.

“Why she does not stay with the others?” Kelna asked, a bit louder.

“I believe, Mistress, that the mare wants to keep her companions in sight and this is the only position from which she can do so.”

Kelna smiled. She had suspected something along these lines, but hearing it from Kaitanu put things in a whole new light. “Very good. You are very good with horses. I think that will do. Work for me, yes?”

The trickle of relief Kaitanu had been denying now came flooding in like a river. He allowed himself a breath or two before turning to face her with deceptive calm.

“My master will be very pleased to have me work here for you. Thank you, Mistress.”

A sort of half-smile tugged at Kelna’s lips. “And you? Are you pleased?”

These words hit Kaitanu between the eyes, so much so that he looked up and almost met her gaze straight on. Only at the last moment did he catch himself, bowing his head to mask his confusion. The kelvic could scarcely believe his ears. No one had ever asked him how he felt about anything before, except to give expected praise. Kelna’s question didn't seem to be along those lines. She was asking him whether he would like to work for her. What did his feelings matter? Why ask him?

“I am very pleased to be employed, Mistress.” It was an automatic response, and not untrue. Kaitanu simply hadn’t considered his own feelings because they weren’t important. So long as he had accomplished his goal of obtaining a job that was what counted. The kelvic would have taken a job digging ditches or cleaning latrines for all his personal preferences mattered. What did he actually think about this? Kaitanu didn’t know. Still in all, working among animals he understood would not be unpleasant.

The pale young man was so caught up in these strange new thoughts that he almost forgot the other part of his mission. Having obtained employment, all he had left to do was secure the matter of his wages. They must be brought up, but that was a harder subject around which to wrap his brain. Luckily Kelna did it for him.

“I will start you today- five gold mizas for full day work, two gold for today at half-day. You will start full day tomorrow. Agree?”

Kaitanu bowed gracefully, heart beating fast. If he’d believed in any gods he would be gushing out silent thanks to them right about now. As it was, he felt rather confused and numb, in addition to being relieved. “The terms are acceptable to my master. I am at your service, Mistress.”

“Kelna.” she corrected him, one brow arched in amusement.

He repeated at once, with another bob of his head. “Kelna.”

“It is well.” her smile was thoughtful once more. “I have doubt that Dravite Blackwater is master, but let it be. Come.”

With that, she walked back to the main tent with Kaitanu following behind, barely able to conceal bewilderment at his good fortune. For one with his sort of life it had been a long time coming.

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Earning A Copper

Postby Tribal on September 26th, 2015, 11:49 pm

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G R A D E S

Kaitanu

Experience

  • Observation: 3
  • Investigation: 2
  • Philosophy: 2
  • Logic: 3
  • Land Navigation: 1
  • Rhetoric: 2
  • Socialisation: 2
  • Medicine: 1
  • Animal Husbandry: 1

Lore

  • Dravite: Ankal of The Blackwater Pavilion
  • Observation: Sight, scent, and sounds of Endrykas
  • Dravite: Friend or foe?
  • Kaitanu: The hunt for a job
  • Location: The Guided Horse
  • The Guided Horse: Run by Kelna Nightride
  • Kelna Nightride: Knows Dravite Blackwater
  • Culture: Masters never equip their slaves with weapons in Endrykas
  • Kaitanu: The sick will not be tolerated in Endrykas
  • Kaitanu: Scars of the past
  • Kelna Nightride: A fair woman
  • Kaitanu: A new home, a new job, a new life

Notes

Really good thread, Kaitanu. In future job threads make sure you do a lot more of the actual job (working with horses, grooming, etc), to get maximum points. If you keep posts around 500 words this will also help you get more skill points. I'm really impressed by this job threads and the fact that you went above and beyond with the word count (most only just get to 2500). Enjoy the rewards, if you have any questions or concerns about the grade, or you were hoping to get some skills/lore you feel I have missed, feel free to contact me.

On your CS you will have to draw up a table for skills to keep track of where all your stills came from as part of the Mizahar rules. This can be as simple as using the following:

[table*]Skill | Points | Total

Observation | 2XP 3XP | 5XP
Endurance | 12SP | 12

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(remove * for it to work)

You also need to make a note of the skills you started with, SP (Starting Points) RB (Racial Bonus), etc. Just send me a PM if you're still confused.
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