[Note by Astator] Charsi Terras

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Charsi Terras

Postby Charsi Terras on September 22nd, 2015, 6:05 pm

Charsi Terras


Appearance

Race: Charsi Silverveins Terras
Gender: Female
Age: 58 Years
Birthday: 61 Fall 457 AV
Birthplace: Izurith

Appearance: Charsi is short and stout, but very muscular. Standing a little over five feet, she weighs close to 190 lbs. Her hair is dark and cut short to keep it from getting in her face while smithing. Her left arm, being the Isurian arm, is dark violet with bluish-silver lines running through it.

Character Concept

Charsi is very abrupt and blunt. She chooses not to mince words, but does not go out of her way to insult others either. She can be loud and boisterous, or quiet and pensive depending on how much work she did that day. The more she works, the louder she is. She is slow to trust, but once she does, it runs deeply. She is highly critical of her own work, finding the smallest flaws to be reasons to spiral into rage or depression.

Character History

Born in Izurith, Charsi grew up around smithing and forging. From an early age, she found that the hammer was for her. Though she doesn't mind crafting things that need to be made, such as doors and locks, she prefers to craft things of beauty. This, and a fascination with the Akalak culture, led her to Riverfall.

Language

Fluent Language: Isur, Tukant
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language:

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Jewelcrafting 25 SP 25 Competent
Metalsmithing 15 SP 15 Novice
Blacksmithing 10 RB, 10 SP 20 Novice


Lores

Lore of Akalak Culture
Lore of Religion: Izurdin

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Father's iron smithing hammer

Housing

Location: Akalak

House: 20x20 single room cottage


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


Thread List

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Charsi's Forge
Isur | Tukant | Common
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Charsi Terras

Postby Astator on November 18th, 2015, 1:26 pm

I have found a few errors with your character sheet. Unfortunately this means you are unable to continue roleplaying until they are corrected.

  • Birthplace: Izurith. I am assuming you mean the city of Sultros, home of the Isur? If so. Please change.
  • Isur are flat five feet. Right from the lore:
    Height
    5' both male and female


  • Fluent Language: Isur, Tukant. You can only have one fluent language, please place the other one as Basic or Poor. Also, how did she come along learning Tukant? Your history is very very short. Please expand upon this.
  • Jewelcrafting is only at 25, not 26. She is still a Novice, not at Competent yet. Please fix this.
  • You can only have the Cloak or the Coat, not both. Please choice.
  • Your housing location is not Akalak (that is a race) it would be Riverfall if your History is to be used as the deciding factor.
  • As an Isur you are allowed 1 gnosis mark of Izurdin. Please apply for this at the Help Desk, once complete please follow the same rolls as below for your character sheet. All you need to do is tell them in a polite fashion that you are playing and Isur and would like the racial mark.
  • You must attach your character sheet to your profile to do that you take this URL:
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    http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic61318.html
    and go to this link: Profile Links and append the above code into the Character Sheet slot and submit it. You will do the same thing when you get the Storyteller Secrets Thread from the Help Desk when you get the gnosis mark. You can then also add it to your character sheet.
  • Please list all your in character threads in your list as mandatory for all character sheets.

When you are finished, please PM me by hitting the envelope underneath my name.

Thank you,

Astator
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