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[Antinous Fighting Pit]Training is Fun, Maybe? (Garland)

Postby Ferrin Al'Mandrikan on December 22nd, 2015, 1:51 pm

Ferrin

"Not really much to see. "Longsword" was doing much of the work." Ferrin replied as he had been patted on the back cordially. Ferrin smiled at Garland and did the same. As if the two were long time best friends or something.

Half of the people who had bet on the two squires seemed to have been angry with their loss. Others were quite pleased with the outcome ad Ferrin and Garland strolled away from the crowd Ferrin heard some yelling behind him before he could have had time to react.

Garland had had already pushed out of the way and took a blunt Longsword into the face... "Hey you petching shyke-head. What the petch do you think your doing?" The squire seemed to have had ignored the young hunter as if he weren't there.

He said something to Garland "Commoners like you don't deserve to even polish our boots. I think it's time to put you in your place." And Ferrin felt as if the squire had had actually meant it. Sometimes squires can be total nutjobs.

Garland replied back "Funny, that a commoner seemed to be able to have more honor than you do."
"Also, how about you stop picking on the commoners and or citizens who aren't squires/Knights. Your lucky I didn't kill you with this petching blunted sword. If I used my actual sword you would have been dead on first strike if I had had gotten the chance." Ferrin said tauntingly.

Ferrin got up, and sighed heavily as the Knights came strolling in now. Only a few though, those few Knights came in armed and others came to take "Longsword." Hopefully to the tank, Ferrin thought bitterly.

"Yeah I'm good Garland, how's your face? We should take you to a healer to get it looked at. C'mon."He said with a smile."Thanks for saving me back there. Really appreciate it." Ferrin said with a smile.

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[Antinous Fighting Pit]Training is Fun, Maybe? (Garland)

Postby Elias Caldera on February 20th, 2016, 8:04 pm


Behold, Your Just Rewards!


Ferrin Al'Mandrikan


Experience and Lore :
Skills
  • Observation +4
  • Intimidation +2
  • Socialization +2
  • Rhetoric +1
  • Tactics +1
  • Leadership +1
  • Weapon: Broadsword +2

Lores
  • Location: The Anthonius Fighter's Pit
  • Garland: A Talented Fighter
  • Garland: Took a Hit For Me
  • Tactic: Taunting Your Opponent Into a Mistake
  • The Knighthood: Filled With All Kinds


Miscellaneous :
Injuries
  • None

Loot and Expenses
  • None




Garland


Experience and Lore :
Skills
  • Intimidation +1
  • Rhetoric +2
  • Weapon: Shield +3
  • Brawling +1
  • Endurance +2
  • Weapon: Sword +2
  • Unarmed Combat +2

    Shield Points
    +2 [For Defending Your Fellow Squire]

Lores
  • Location: The Anthonius Fighter's Pit
  • Ferrin: Not Too Shabby With a Blade
  • Tactic: Taunting Your Opponent Into a Mistake
  • The Knighthood: Filled With All Kinds


Miscellaneous :
Injuries
  • A nasty cut just above the right ear
    [Will heal completely within a week. Thanks to the quick work of the healers however, the wound won't be leaving a scar.]

Loot and Expenses
  • None


Comments :
    A fine little fight. Nicely done guys.

    One thing I wanted to point out concerned you, Ferrin.

    You seemed to have picked up a new habit of using periods instead of comas since the last time I graded your thread. Perhaps you've gotten better since this thread, but this was very disjointing and i'm surprised you didn't correct any of it, particularly that first post.

    I can only suggest that in the future you take a minute read over what you wrote before hitting the post button, because i'm sure you can improve your writing with just a few spellchecks here and there.


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