The Breakdown

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The Breakdown

Postby Amelia on January 9th, 2016, 4:46 pm

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Amelia was close to screaming. Frustration boiled up inside her gut like hot bile, and the young blonde, growling like an animal, released her hair once more. Life was filled with challenges, and cosmetology was just one such challenge that she was desperate to conquer.

Earlier that day, Amelia had spotted a woman of average beauty with a stunning hair style. Her hair was separated into several, tiny little braids, that were then piled on top of her head in spirals and curls. It was magnificent, and Amelia immediate thought had been: if it looks that good on you, imagine what how it would look on me! And since then, she had been trying to replicate those intricate twists and knots.

The braiding of her hair was the easy part. Amelia separated her golden locks into several sections; twelve in total. She then proceeded to twist three section together, overlapping the two outer sections into the middle over and over again until eventually had twelve skinny braids.

It was the next part that was causing her some difficulty. She twirled and twisted one braid up onto her scalp and pinned it down. But as she progressed around her head, Amelia was disheartened to notice how her attempt of the style looked messy, unkempt.

She had since made five more attempts, but there was little improvement in both her styling and her mood. Amelia was close to losing her temper, and she had finally decided to request that her father pay for hairstyling lessons when she heard a peculiar noise. It sounded like something terribly fragile being thrown against something terribly sturdy — an explosion of fractured glass.

“Gods, woman! You almost killed me!”

Unperturbed by the clatter, Amelia stood up. She presumed her clumsy mother had simply dropped the glass of wine she usually greeted her father with. Briefly, the young woman hoped that he was in a good mood, as Cliff Tisswell was far less willing to part with his money when he was irritated. She skipped down stairs, eagerly calling out “Pa, can I—”

The request died on her lips like a gasp. Her mother and father were standing on opposing sides of the grand living room. Her father’s feet stood in a puddle of broken glass, his face frozen in a twisted, morose expression. Jona, by comparison, paced back and forth along the back wall, her paint-stained fingers brushing away tears. So her mother was crying, but Amelia was not yet concerned. Her mother cried almost daily, over her painting (or lack of painting), or because she spotted a particularly wide-eyed child strolling the streets below their home.

“Jo, what are you on about?”

“My sister saw you, Cliff. So don’t deny it.”

This sparked Amelia’s interest. She remained silent on the stairway that connected the living room to the upper hallway of their home, where the bedrooms and study was kept. What had her father been caught doing? Drinking? Yes, quite possibly. Drugs? Almost certainly not, but what else could Jona Trisswell be so angered by?

Jonas voice strained from across the room, paper thin and watery. “With that… that girl. She’s half your age, Cliff. What are you thinking?”
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The Breakdown

Postby Amelia on January 9th, 2016, 4:55 pm

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And now Amelia’s stomach knotted. She felt the immediate need to vomit and run away, but instead the young blonde remained still, clinging to the stair bannister for support. Had she heard that right? Her father had been seen with another woman? She tried to make sense of it, to find some excuse for her beloved father. A business meeting, a particularly enthusiastic student. But no: suddenly something slotted into place and she saw the recent seasons for what they had true been. Her father had been working late, claiming that his fellow scholar’s were all under the same growing pressure. Even when he was home, he’d been distant. Only three days ago, Amelia had demanded a new dress for a friend’s birthday celebration, and instead of putting up a fight to protect his wallet, Cliff had merely shrugged and handed his daughter a selection of kina. even then, she had known something was awry but Amelia had been too excited by the prospect of a new dress. She’d gotten matching shoes, as well.

And yet despite her mind working so frantically, so desperately, to make sense of what her mother had just said, the truth of Cliff’s affair did not strike Amelia until she heard her father give a nervous, warbled laugh say the words: “what? Jona, you’re speaking crazy. What girl?”

He was lying. She knew it and so did Jona, who gave another ear-piercing wail and flung another object towards her husband. “I knew it!” She declared in a voice that was barely a voice at all, but a selection of high-pitched sounds.

Amelia traipsed down the stairs, her gaze set and hard on her father’s face. “What?” She deplored of him, silently wishing that he would laugh again and out his arm around the shoulder of his daughter, his little girl who he lived to spoil.

But instead, Cliff merely glanced at Amelia, as if he was distracted by something far more entrancing that his sobbing wife. A tick passed, where father and daughter engaged in a wordless discussion.

Is it true?

I’ve had it here.

Is it true?

I need to leave.


His hand was on the knob of the door he had just walked through, and this time Amelia spoke out loud to him: ”Is it true?”

To be fair, Cliff did not say no; he didn’t lie. But neither did he admit defeat and tell the Gods’ honest truth. Nor did he break down with guilt and beg his wife and daughter to forgive him. Instead, Cliff Trisswell merely looked at his daughter and gave a weighted and single nod. That gesture seemed to take all the effort of the world, and yet Amelia was infuriated. How dare he destroy her life with such a simple, pathetic gesture? She deserved a detailed explanation, a mouthful of I’m sorry’s and it was just once! Just once!

But a nod?

For the second time that evening, Amelia found herself wanting to scream. But unlike before, when she made herself follow social law and keep her mouth shut, she let her anger fly out. Amelia screamed, but not in the heartbroken way her mother had, or indeed in the way of a young woman whose life had instantly changed forever. Instead, it was war cry that left Amelia’s lips. She threw herself forward, slamming her body against the door her father had now opened ajar. The door closed shut, and Cliff looked to his daughter in surprise. Even Jona had been silenced by the noise that had left the mouth of her sweet, spoiled little girl.
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The Breakdown

Postby Amelia on January 14th, 2016, 7:34 pm

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As her father stepped warily back, Amelia came forward again. Her hands reached out, nails clawing at the air and, finally, at her father’s face and neck. Cliff yelled in shock and pain, though in truth no blood had come even close to be drawn. But the violence with which Amelia had moved was utterly unexpected. Sure, she had been in her fair share of fights with friends, pulling hair and slapping faces but nothing so vulgar.

Instinctively, he pushed her away, and now even Jona was behind Amelia, trying her feeble best to control the wild beast that had become her daughter. But the blonde became unrestrained again, and flung herself towards her father. Another sound escaped from her throat, a low growl that belonged to a tiger rather than a young woman. Again nails, clawing and scraping at whatever they could find.

This time, it ended with a slap that had Amelia drop to the floor, once more a wounded bird. The viciousness had fallen away and instead all that remained was a red-cheeked, hurt girl. She stared up at her father, the one who had delivered aforementioned slap. Cliff, in turn, watched her, his expression creased in dying frustration that was slowly giving way to realisation, then horror.

What had he done?

“Amelia…” He said, but something stopped the man. He looked from his daughter to his shell-shocked wife, who slowly backed away from him, her hands up defensively. He squared himself, brushed non-existant dust off of his shoulder. “I’m not happy here. I haven’t been for years. But Sheila makes me happy.”

Sheila? Sheila Hanover?”

The girl was one of Amelia’s friends. They had known each other since they were both five, and their entire friendship had been based on a shared love of all things pink and fluffy. In those days, such common interests were enough to cement any friendship, but Sheila and Amelia had been closer than most. The similarity in their names added to this; they’d even come up with a rhyme for themselves, complete with hand-claps and a dance routine.

There was that flickering of expression on her father’s face again; discovery, annoyance, regret. But no guilt. His silent admission was enough for Amelia to get herself onto her feet, but she moved quickly away from those large, slap-happy hands. Her cheek stung, but the betrayal was all the more bitter.

He left without another word, merely chugging his shoulders liker an indecisive boy before exiting the home he shared with his wife and child. Immediately Jona started to sob again, wailing and wearing and praying to the Gods all at once, making an almighty noise. Amelia bit her lip, fearful that she would scold her mother for being so devastated. She herself, Amelia, felt nothing but emptiness. She longed to feel anger or upset, but no. She felt… numb.

Was this shock?
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The Breakdown

Postby Brandon Blackwing on March 6th, 2016, 9:21 am

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AMELIA

XP:
  • Cosmetology +1
  • Observation +3
  • Stealth +1
  • Interrogation +1
  • Unarmed Combat +1

Lore:
  • Hairstyling: Intricate Braided Hairstyle
  • Cliff Triswell: Cheating Father
  • Unarmed Combat: Clawing
  • Sheila Hanover: Usurper!
  • Experiencing Shock

Notes:
Well, this certainly was quite enjoyable :D Great work!
Also, I had no idea what that hairstyle is called or if it even has a name, so ehm. This lore you got will have to do for now. Please do contact me if you want to see it altered though.

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