Seamus

[Seamus]

Seamus Appearance Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 19 Birthday: 3rd day of Winter, 496 AV Birthplace: Lhavit Appearance: Seamus is not a tall man standing at five feet seven inches tall, weighing one hundred eighty pounds. His hair come down to his shoulders in light red loose locks and are seen worn pulled back most of the time and his face is covered in a short stubble. Over all one would see him as a stout somewhat muscular little man who looked more at home in the wilds than town. He can often be seen using a war fork as a walking stick. Character History Seamus is a native resident of Lhavit, born and raised. He has never had a reason to want to leave and has led a very content life. He was born to a relatively normal and fairly respectable couple of scholars. His mother was an astronomer and his father was a religious scholar. At a young age Seamus showed absolutely no prowess in scholarly studies and as is normal in Lhavit the boy was moved around until he was placed in a field that he accelerated in. It was not until he was sent to work with his uncle on his mothers side, who was a hunter that he found his spot in society. He had found himself very much at home in the wilderness and shadowed his uncle until it was deemed that he was old enough to go hunting on his own. Language Fluent Language: Common Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Hunting 10 SP, 15 RP 25 Novice Weapon; Short Bow 20 SP 20 Novice Weapon; War Fork 10 SP 10 Novice Wilderness Survival, Mountains 5 SP 5 Novice Tracking 5 SP 5 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of the Mountains surrounding Lhavit; bodies of water Lore of Lhavitian large game animal tracks, time since made Possessions -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 11 Kina -Short Bow -Quiver -Arrows, short bow (20) -Arrows, game (20) -Climbing claws -Toolkit, Hunter/ Trappers -Rope, hemp (50 feet) -Axe, carpenter Heirloom: He was given his grandfathers old war fork. Housing Location: Lhavit House: A cottage at The Okomo Estates Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 Kina 100 Kina Short Bow -30 Kina 70 Kina Quiver -20 Kina 50 Kina -Arrows, Short Bow (20) -1 Kina 49 Kina Arrows, Game (20) -4 Kina 45 Kina Climbing Claws 8 Kina 38 Kina Toolkit, Hunter/Trapper 25 Kina 13 Kina Rope, Hemp 50 feet 1 Kina 12 Kina Axe, carpenters 1 Kina 11 Kina Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Astator]

Welcome to Mizahar! Unfortunately there are some minor issues wrong with your CS that must be addressed.

• As you character’s birthdate has not yet passed you would be 19 not 20. Please fix this.
• How did Seamus learn Fratava? As Lhavit is a landlocked city and Fratava is the tongue of the sea faring Svefra.
• All weapon skills need to be listed as Weapon: weaponname or Weapon(weaponname)
• Your lores are far too broad, the content of the game of the Kalea region is numerous as is the wilds surrounding Lhavit… Please narrow this down, if you need help please contact me.
• Coat OR Cloak not both.

Once completed please PM me using the little envelope below my name and let me know.

Thank you,
Astator