Niccolo

[Niccolo]

Niccolo Appearance Race: Kelvic [ Peregrine Falcon - Falco Peregrinus ] Caste: Yasi Gender: Male Age: 4 Birthday: 29, Summer, 512 Birthplace: Kalea Appearance: Niccolo, in his human form, stands at a tall six feet, three inches, his build conforming to that of a hunter; that is, slim, sleek, and corded with lean muscle. Like his own royal bird of prey form, Niccolo possesses a royal structure to his face, consisting of a strong jaw and strong, rounded chin, high cheek bones, and firm lips. --- FC: Aaron Jakubenko In his animal form, Niccolo is a somewhat medium sized bird bordering small. His wings are longer in length then his body, and his legs are the usual stick thing with incredibly sharp, naturally curved talons. With sleek, dark colored feathers, Niccolo was built to be at the top of the food-chain in this form, keeping strong yet light muscle and quick wings. Character Concept Personality wise, Niccolo obviously thinks quite high of himself. He's somewhat jerk-ish in the city of redheads, and being so out of place next to the smaller, fiery people of the sky only makes him that much more special in his own eyes. Much like his more wild counterparts, however, he possessed a a sort of aggressive predator attitude to him - where no one is worthy to fly next to him until proven. A man (or boy, really) of shiny things just like his father, he wants to get rich quick and somehow find a way to defy the Caste System in Wind Reach, no matter how impossible that is. As of yet, though, being a Yasi, all he gets is his allowance and the hope that someone will take him on as an apprentice. Character History He was born in Wind Reach to a pair of Kelvics traveling with their bondmates, his father a black bear and his mother a duck. His father taught him everything he knew, such as Hypnotism and how to gather Intelligence so as to blackmail.... Because they both loved money, where Niccolo's mother was more gentle and kind-hearted. As always, though, all happy stories end with a somewhat unhappy ending. Like most animals, Niccolo's parents left him when he could hunt for himself, though they left him in Wind Reach, where they frequently visited. And now, he's a Yasi trying to get all the money. [ Pardon the terrible and small History, I'm going to flesh it out more as I write. ] Language Fluent Language: Avian Fluent Language: Nari Basic Language: Common Poor Language: None Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Hunting 10 RB, 10 SP 20 Novice Tracking 10 SP 10 Novice Unarmed Combat 10 SP 10 Novice Intelligence 5 SP 5 Novice Stealth 5 SP 5 Novice Hypnotism 5 SP 5 Novice Persuasion 5 SP 5 Novice Lores Lore of Wind Reach Geography Lore of Inarta Culture Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Bryda -Simple Cloak -Simple Sontav -Simple Undergarments -Leather ankle boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb [ Glass ] -Brush [ Glass ] -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Pinions Heirloom: A violet, glass pendant vial given to him by his mother. What she wanted him to do with it, he's yet to figure out. Housing Location: Wind Reach House: 20x20 room in the Yasiry with a table, chair, bunk, chest all of average quality Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 Pinions 100 Pinions Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Factorum]

There are a couple of things that need to be taken care of on the CS:

1. Backstory: the possibility of the character being a falcon like the father is impossibly rare. There is only one person in Mizahar that knows the secret of breeding what you want other than the orignal creator and that is Morwen. the type of kelvic that is born is very random. It is not plausible that your father would be a kelvic falcon.

2. Birthplace: you need to have a birth city. Somewhere in Kalea is not sufficient. There needs to be a city base. Even the character parents would be based out of windreach though they may have hunted often. Which is quite in character and plausible, but they would be based in a city, in this case likely wind reach.

Please let me know when these items have been corrected, Pm me any questions. soon as they are fixed we can get you that green check mark.

Thank you.