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Comments: I really enjoyed the "lone warrior out in the plains" sort of feel. You really emphasized the dangers of the prairies, both magical and beastly. He has quite the crude language, but it definitely shows character both in the dialog and narrative.
Your Grader,
Sayana
Belugnir
Skills
- Planning: 1
- Tracking: 3
- Wilderness Survival: 2
- Observation: 5
- Endurance: 5
- Carving: 1
- Land Navigation: 1
- Weapon: Pole Axe: 3
- Investigation: 2
- Acrobatics: 2
- Weapon: Dagger: 1
- Tactics: 1
- Medicine: 1
- Location: The Prairies
- Wilderness Survival: Gathering fuel on desolate plains
- Wilderness Survival: Striking flint
- Wilderness Survival: Surrounding campfire with sand
- Endurance: Staying awake all night
- Tracking: Making a directional mark for future tracking
- Prairie: Giant monstrous skeleton landmark
- Noktal: Giant scavenger birds of Sahova
- Tracking: Following a scavenger bird to track a potential corpse
- Finding dead apprentices on the prairies
- Rabid charred nuit
- Poleaxe: Using the force of an enemy to impale themselves
- Acrobatics: Dodging opponents from above
- Medicine: Cleaning and bandaging a shallow wound
- Mounting an enemy's head on a stake
- Coat is now a jacket with tattered edges
- Torn shirt
- Broken poleaxe
- 3 missing throwing daggers
- Noktal head
Comments: I really enjoyed the "lone warrior out in the plains" sort of feel. You really emphasized the dangers of the prairies, both magical and beastly. He has quite the crude language, but it definitely shows character both in the dialog and narrative.
Your Grader,
Sayana
Boxcode design: Firenze
