Can Thing's Just NOT Go Horribly Wrong for Once? (Zoya)

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Sira Lore(s) Time to Stop And Smell the Roses Chiet are People Too The Potential to Rise Above All Work and No Play Makes Jack a Dull Boy Flightless Humans Can Hunt Too You Know River Wading Blinded by a Murderous Rage Killer's Guilt For Every Action, there is an Opposite or Equal Reaction Duty, Above All Else Skill(s) Archery +1 XP Hunting + 2 XP Wilderness Survival + 3 XP Tracking + 2 XP Cooking + 1 XP Socializing + 1 XP Weapon: Sword + 2 XP Method to my Madness: I liked the detail about the flower bit. I count building a fire as 'wilderness survival'. Wooow… lots of skills straight from the getgo; Good for you. I also counted the bunny skinning as wilderness survival; if you would like it listed as something else please PM. Even though you were kicking the Sym, I still gave you sword points because you were still wielding it and I considered it a mixed attack. If you would like a point in brawling instead, again, just PM Zoya Lore(s) Don't Judge a Book by its Cover Restless Night First Blood Skill(s) Cooking + 1 XP Socializing + 1 XP Archer + 1 XP Method to my Madness: 5 minutes hunting?... I would only count that if you were a master hunter. Five minutes for a rabbit maybe, but a fawn is too much for your skill level. And the actual hunting wasn't described, only the capture so I wouldn't be able to award any points. I was still reluctant to give points for cooking, just because not much thought was put into the herbs (what did they look like, smell like, feel like? Anything?) Everything is much to vague and rushed. Extra Notes: Why was a chiet out hunting? Specifically why would one be assigned to a professional city approved hunt? Private hunting for fun maybe, but assigned by the city? And a masseuse who cooks? She should have no business with city hunts - she could endanger (which she somewhat did) the real hunter. And why would an Eagle Rider attack a group of Sym? Sym are very welcome in our city as long as they aren't trouble. We even give them our Dek, no charge. There were a lot of plot holes in this thread… hopefully not again? You can address any questions or concerns to the little voice in your head. A.K.A. PM me.